I chose to critique this because I also enjoy painting military women hehe. The strongest element here is the technique. The clothes fit exceptionally well and the folds are very accurately rendered. The hair falls nicely too, it could use a few more loose strands and reflections. Looks a little too obsessively brushed at the moment.
Things to work on and push further. The originality is there in a way, but I've also seen many things like it before. Next time try something wild that no one has ever thought of before, I'm sure you will be rewarded with massive numbers of views and such. The face has a nice expression but I would try working on it a little more, it's the center of attention so it should be as perfect as possible. Try some imperfections, zoom way in. Maybe reduce the size of the eyes just a tad.
This is up to you, but I would suggest drawing the whole figure (even if it will eventually be cropped). And even simple backgrounds are advised.
Things to work on and push further. The originality is there in a way, but I've also seen many things like it before. Next time try something wild that no one has ever thought of before, I'm sure you will be rewarded with massive numbers of views and such. The face has a nice expression but I would try working on it a little more, it's the center of attention so it should be as perfect as possible. Try some imperfections, zoom way in. Maybe reduce the size of the eyes just a tad.
This is up to you, but I would suggest drawing the whole figure (even if it will eventually be cropped). And even simple backgrounds are advised.
Nice job!
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